Over the past few weeks I’ve brought up the two of the three
basic components of a story: The Beginning, and The Middle. Today we’re going
to wrap up the storytelling trifecta discussing the words all writers are
aiming for… The End.
There are two ways to look at endings. First would be the
ending of a standalone story. Second is the dual ending that indicates a
series. We’ll step into some detail about both of these types of writing.
Standalones
Whether it’s a novel, a short story, or even a flash fiction
piece like those from last week’s competition. Standalone stories are those
that are told from start to finish in a single book. They are stories that need
to be wrapped up satisfactorily such that the reader feels like the story is
indeed over. These stories may be part of a series, but can still be classed as
standalones in that each book does not require a previous story be read to get
to know the characters. Examples of basic standalone novels would be Stephen
King’s or Sandra Brown’s books. Standalone series writers include folks like
Lee Child, whose Reacher series or Ian Fleming’s Bond books. Those can be
picked up at any point in the series and read as individual stories on their
own merit, or read in any order without ruining the story line.
Having a good ending in paramount in any novel. Notice: Good
Ending does not necessarily equal Happy Ending. This is an important
distinction to remember depending upon the format, the audience, and the genre
of the story.
Format is important because depending on the length of the
story (novel, novella, short, flash, etc) you may or may not have room to build
a happy ending. But an ending that leaves most of the closure to the
imagination, preferably in an easy to imagine way, can be just as
satisfying. Not all genres demand a
happy ending either. Quite often thrillers, horror and crime stories end with a
good, but decidedly unhappy ending where the good guys are badly injured or
perhaps even die, the town is destroyed, etc. The old Twilight Zone episodes
were terrific for this type of satisfying but not very happy ending where the
viewer was left with the knowledge that rather than things going nicely for the
hero of the story he/she ends up going mad instead and being carted away in a
straightjacket. The classic William Shatner Episode “Nightmare at 20,000 Feet” is a perfect
example of this.
One the other hand some books in those same genres are
perfectly good with happy endings. It all depends on the preferences and style
of the author, and what you want your audience to feel when then put the book
down at the end. The point here is that you don’t have to end with everyone smiling and hugging and rainbows in the
sky for it to be a satisfying ending. One of my favourite books of all time,
and probably the closest thing to a romance I’ll ever admit to reading, is The
Thorn Birds. No spoilers here, but that book had one of the least happy, yet
most satisfying endings I’ve ever enjoyed.
Ongoing Series
Now, for series books the rules above apply, but there is
the additional aspect that the story does not end at the end of the first book.
The reader is left with that ever popular dilemma know as … Duh, Duh, Duuuhnnn
… The Cliffhanger!
Ongoing series books are those that carry a single story,
and usually multiple side stories, from one book to the next building on each
preceding story usually with the characters growing or otherwise changing throughout
the series. Great examples of this type of building series include writers like
George R.R. Martin’s Game of Thrones series, or Ken Follet’s Centuries Series
where we watch the characters grow from young to old over the course of three,
four, or more books. One of my favorite historical fiction writers, Bernard
Cornwell, took twenty one books to lead Richard Sharpe from being an illiterate
private in Wellington’s Army in India to retiring as a highly literate Colonel
after the Napoleanic Wars. In each book Sharpe grew older, wiser and stronger.
But each individual book in the series also had to have some sort of ending
that closed that story satisfactorily.
The key with keeping an ongoing series running yet having
that good ending to each book is to have multiple simultaneous endings for each
title. This also means having multiple
plot lines for each book. One plot line would be the main theme that carries on
throughout the entire series, in Sharpe’s case watching him grown from slum kid
to famous soldier and wondering how he will survive each thing as he moves
through, this will be the cliffhanger that makes the reader want to learn more
about the character of your story.
In addition to that main theme there has to be a more urgent
plot line that runs through only the one book and has all of the ups and down
and twists of a standalone book. This theme, it could also be multiple themes,
should have closure by the end of the book.
For example the first book of George R.R. Martin’s Game of Thrones has
three minor theme endings:
1. Robb becomes King of the North
2. John ‘takes the black’ and joins The Wall
3. Daenerys becomes
The Mother of Dragons
Those minor endings each close out the book with a sense of
satisfaction, while still allowing the cliffhanger that will introduce the next
books…still in the making.
So, there you have it. Endings are uber-important.
Whether your books are individual episodes with no
expectation of ever meeting those characters again, or if they are ongoing
series that will pull readers back time and again, you have to end each book
with a bang that signals the party is over.
Next week …. How to make your stories seem alive AKA… “Show
Don’t Tell”.
This is great, Basil. I have always remembered those Twilight Zone episodes. Whew. Talk about the shivers. I'm working on at least one piece goes in that direction. The endings seem to come up out of nowhere and smack you in the head with something totally creepy.
ReplyDeleteThat's what I loved too, the unexpected endings. One of my other favourites was Time Enough at Last, where the last man in a destroyed city finds reason to live by gathering up all of the library books to read, only to have his glasses smash to bits. That was reason enough for me to make sure I always have multiple pairs of glasses nearby.
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